Questioning poem(me questioning the reader)

by ChAsInG PavEmEnTs   Oct 30, 2007


When it comes to the one you love..

has your mind ever refused to believe what your own eyes were seeing?

have your ears ever blocked out every name he or she has ever called you?

has their touch ever drifted you off into space?

when your with your special someone have you ever ignored everything and everyone around you?

when your not with them have you ever just sat and thought about only that person?

have you ever used someone else to try and cover up your feelings that u still have for your special some1?

have you ever found yourself asking what you did wong to make them leave you?
or not talk to you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Yes.

    It's funny when you refer to use someone as a substitute for that other person. I can relate.

    You've got to remember that you cannot and should not dwell in the past for long. You'll find yourself drifting backwards like a boat moving against the current, you'll find yourself living in the past. It's never easy.

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I like your writing. I think it's heaps personal and it's easy for other people to relate.
    5/5

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