Double sorrow

by amber   Oct 31, 2007


Double sorrow
beg or borrow
we wont be together
not now not ever
so you suffer as u do
untill i no you hate me to

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  • 16 years ago

    by gack60

    Short but sweet! i liked it, it was a good quick read. i noticed a small spelling error at the end tho, where you said no should be know. Sorry not to be critical but it just spoils a nice piece to read it with spelling errors.

    Still a really good job tho.

    Well done

    Gary.

  • 16 years ago

    by christina

    WOW!for such a short poem you really got your point accross

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