Love's Rapture

by Simon Hayes   Oct 31, 2007


Follow me, release your love,
Join me at love's Elysium.
Envisage my body neatly buried
Beneath the petals of your seduction.

Reveal to me your secret desires,
Encompass your warmth around my soul.
Dance with me, chant my name,
Feel the passion burn within.

Embrace this moment, as we two
Indulge in love's rapture.

© Simon Hayes 31/10/07

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Wow, you must be a romantic at heart!

    A beautiful plea for love, Simon!

    A very well done from me,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow,
    this is nicely written great poem that shows great emotions
    keep up the great work and a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    Such a lovely piece..

    "Follow me, release your love,
    Join me at love's Elysium."

    dazling..

  • 16 years ago

    by Lenny

    Its alright. It didn't blow my mind but it wasn't a cliched disasterpiece. I like the first stanza, the second let you down a little... And thats my opinion. Passionate..

  • 16 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully written my friend.

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