Aw, very nice poem. You expressed your feeling really good and the flow was great. 5/5

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Great poem....lots of emotion and feelings. Great job on this! Keep up the great wrok! 5/5

Wow.
this poems awesome.
theres so much emotion in it and the flow was awesome.
i loved how you ended the poem with a question, and the ending overall was fabulous =]

it was a great poem (Y)
5/5

cindy

I ask my self all the time what I would do without the girl I love, and really I can never come up with an answer. All I know is I wouldn't be this happy thats for sure and thats all that matters. Excellent poem great ending 5/5 GG23

Aww.. i love it. love the feeling u portay in this. Truly had to have been written from the heart. It was a wonderful read! keep it up! :o]

The deep feeling from your eyes
Is something I had never knew
My feelings for you are on the rise
With every day that passes through

i loved that stanza, you wrote this poem so wonderfully and beautifully! i love it. great job

Tons of emotion and passion that i respect very much, don't see that very often expressed in such a well manner, very well done...

I liked this poem even though I found some of the lines to be a little predictable because I could know which rhyme was coming before I read it. Simple with alot of emotion written in great depth. Well done I loved this poem alot. ~Mel

This poem is so cute. I can relate to this.. where would we be without the ones we love..? amazing job on this.. the only issue i had was:

We're walking down the blossom Vally line

did you mean valley? .. why is it capitalized?

other than that it was great

5/5