Torn apart from drugs

by more den just a broken smile   Nov 1, 2007


Drink and drugs are no good
they cause alot of pain
lying and robbing just to get that buzz
it does noting but kill u inside
u think it doesnt bother me
but i hide it with a smile
anytime u came around
u made my life upside down
lying on the ground dying
torn apart from drugs

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    This is pretty good but try to put more rhythm in it rather than just separating lines. You have a lot of feelings which is good, now just try to structure them.

More Poems By more den just a broken smile