Comments : PICTURE

  • 15 years ago

    by Bryan

    This a very good poem haii, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep them coming babe!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by robin milford

    Beautiful absolutely beautiful

  • 15 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is the best in the three I read so far. The rhymes are more shown here. The flow goes nicely and the choosing of words is warm and simple. Nice work 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    Hmm .. interesting piece. I have to be honest ... the flow was shaky and there were parts that words did not fit.

    "If only I had known
    That that would be the start"

    ^I do no think the repitition of the word "that" helps the poem at all. I understand it fits in and makes sense, but it throws off the flow and is not effective.

    Overall, it was fresh read and the storyline was new and interesting. Good job. *4/5*

  • 15 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    If only we could know in an instant if the one we love is our true love. I loved this one. 6/5

  • Aww, this is so beautiful *tear*!!! It showed so much emotion and I can tell you're in love. Great poem. 5/5

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