Wow, this one was very very good, i might add you to my fav author list...keep it up, i cant wait to read the last one...5/5

Love this!
Can relate to this...
Well done, 5/5

Again, very good words an subject, but the rythm could still be improved. the flow is kind of choppy and broken up... which actually mirrors the point of the poem, about a broken heart, so it technically does fit. ahhh irony.

Love it. 5/5 I can totaly relate to this poem. I liked it the best. :]

This is so moving

amazing rythum

K well letys just say half my poems r like this, but i dont think they r this good. mine r usaly feelings of the moment type stuff.
im adding it to my faves,
good job

Damn ahmazing i really like it keep it up! 5/5

Now that was HOTTTTT!!!!! I really enjoyed that. I think it's funny how guys can hurt us and xpect us to to forgive and forget it like it never happened. Keep up the good work.