A Scary Feeling

by Hebe   Nov 2, 2007


A scary feeling

Darkness,
Walls everywhere,
A scary feeling,
Shadows,
Shivers all over your body

Screaming,
A sound full of fear,
A scary feeling,
Echo,
The scream is everywhere

Haunting,
A wolf cries,
A scary feeling,
Running,
A haunt in the night

Whisperings,
Voices everywhere,
A scary feeling,
Exclude,
Hoarse voices around you

Curse,
Predestined to die,
A scary feeling,
Waiting for your destiny
Nobody escapes on the night of Halloween

Written at 31/10/07

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a short poem but it's still great, I think it flowed well, good job.

    I like this stanza.
    Whisperings,
    Voices everywhere,
    A scary feeling,
    Exclude,
    Hoarse voices around you

    Keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Hehe nice ending

  • 16 years ago

    by Phil

    Wow very nicely written Hebe, 5/5 love your work keep it up:

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    SO brightlY writteN.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    I like it =] Nice how you describe every word you say at the beginning of each stanza =] Of course I think that is what you meant to do xD But I actually quite like that style of writing =) anywaaaaaaaaaay... 5/5!
    x

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