Comments : She thinks

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Beautiful poem, I liked the repetition of thouse do lines, making whole poem so powerful! And like it flowed just perfectly! The emotions were so strong. Hope you feeling better soon.
    5/5 Loved this, Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Beyond Repair

    I love the structure, though the message is sad, its really really good. I got like a awesome screamo song out of it but maybe thats just me. haha. Keep up the good work. ~Zach

  • 16 years ago

    by EMMAlouise

    Good lord that actually gave me chills, no word of a lie. It was a stunning poem, very powerful imagery there. Nice work xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Wonderful poems, good emotion, repition was great, fantastic write keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by kaida clover

    Good structure and flow.. again another sad piece but pain can be a good source of material to write about and also good motivation to do so..

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Wow.
    i usually only like poems that rhyme but thisis amazing!!!!! i LOVE it. 5/5 <3

  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Oh my god
    You're really an amazing writer
    I love your poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    I like this poem bcos it could mean about almost anything... and i can realte to it.. =]

    great work..

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by LiNa

    Great poem, i liked it,5/5