U got talent!!
i love it !

Wow great poem yet sad but thats what make a poem nice work

Noelle :)

I did not like the ryhming so much but it still was good 4/5

Good poem, I suggest, however, that when saying goodbye on a poem, it can be somewhere along the lines of
Goodbye, dear love
or Goodbye, darling

and not directly saying that YOU are going to say goodbye.

Keep the words flowing!