I want to go blind

Very nice, I liked it allota ^^ 5/5

Wow... yet another astounding creation from a talented poet... this was awesome... funny how i sometimes feel that way myself, maybe it's just weird, idk... but this poem is really awesome

The repetition of the title worked well in this piece and exaggerated the point you're trying to make. I can see where your coming from in this piece and I think many people when they think about what you have said would agree with you. I saw that you put this poem in the sad category. Personally I think it would work better if you put it in life as this does talk about life and society today. The poem had an ok structure and flow. Again I think you need to use punctuation in your work. But other then that a good job. I could really see what your saying in the piece.

This was a great poem. .

people nowadays are too busy
&& consumed in their own thoughts.
their own needs. their own worries.
to even care about anything else.
but themselves anymore. .

5/5.