Again your poem cotains alot of emotion it flows well and is just the wright length.

Lost love is never gone it lives on inside our hearts, our own existence. You are a natural poetess, keep doing what you do.

This is better than the previous!!! 6/5...

"I feel you so cold you lips so dry" <Make sure you double-check your poems for spelling and grammatical errors because this part is so lovely with its imagery and you don't want a minor mistake to detract from that.

Still, another powerful piece. I quite like this collection of poems.

It's already lost in a doubtful eternity
I wanted to create a modern light
To lighten a path to happiness
Because sincerely I don't accept this reality"

I loved that! You have no idea how much that stanza hit the heart and showed so much honesty and truth within it with me. I like your poetry alot and expecially this style where your writing parts of it such as I II and III This was beautiful. Well done. ~Mel

This poem was amazing,
the way you expressed how you felt with such imagery
was impressive, i liked this piece

5/5

This poem made me feel as if I was read from with in... This is how I feel about my ex-boyfriend.... your peoms are so good but it hurts to read them... they are so good never stopp writing...

This fits perfectly with the piece before it. The flow goes on uninterupted, as does the rythm. Great job. 7/5

When i read it its like I can feel what your saying there is so much emotion

Theres a lot of emotion and i love that in this poem it just flows together well

"It's already lost in a doubtful eternity
I wanted to create a modern light
To lighten a path to happiness
Because sincerely I don't accept this reality"

^^ This was my favourite stanza. It was beautiful. Wonderfully written.

AND ANOTHER ONE!