This is a great write! I love the flow and rhythm, you did a good job expressing yourself. try throwing some symbolism and while ur writing, i found it helps to totally emerse urself in what your feeling (the more powerful the better) and when your done, it usually makes the pain go away on its own - at least shrink it drastically. Keep up the good work, i love your poems. 5/5

That was wondeful poem it rhymed a lot and it made a lot of sense and nice flow
loved the poem .this one is going to my faves poem

Wonderful poem and sad.
be strong and you will find your true man one day

This is a gud poem gurl nd itz happening 2 me rite now so im really feelin it.

This was so sad yet it was quite beautiful at the same time. a very hearfelt poem. it's neve easy saying goodbye.

I cant stand my heart breaking
every time I breathe

i really like those lines, they were touching. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Their is no pain you can feelmore then love somone that dont love you

it was pretty brave of you to take taht decision , a lot of pepole jsut dont see it , and dotn see that it hurt more to stay then to let go ,

good one
keep the hope , and heal the wounds