Alone

by Katie   Nov 6, 2007


Im all alone
in this big world
I do not know
why I attempt-

These struggles condemn me
These thoughts over throw me
I still cant distinguish
Why these feelings overwhelm me

I stand by myself
I struggle to succeed
I dont take to kindly
To the others in need

So with a callous feeling
And an x upon my heart
I struggle though life
As I know nothing will do my part

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Welcome to poems-and-quotes my dear.

    This poem that you have talently penned is often the same emotions that many fall prey to as least once in their life.

    I often say that the only thing worse in life than being alone is when you are alone and lonely in a room full of people.

    Well done my dear. And may your journey here help you to grow in all the writings that you partake.

    ~~Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by ali

    Great emotion pouring out of this piece-- easy to read as well, good stuff!!!
    5/5
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Very filled with emotion, great write keep it up

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