I wonder

by Magda   Nov 7, 2007


Sometimes I wonder if it is real
So many things in common,
so many common dreams

So much emotion
Every time we talk,
a smile is rising on my face.
Nobody understands my distraught air
They could say I am crazy,
I might be...

There's so much space in both our hearts,
Oceans... I'd fill mine all with you.
So much desire, so much love to give,
In you I feel them all,
don't you feel?

So many hours when I do not sleep,
thinking of you... what do you think?
Talking to you...
What would you say
if one day...
would you run away?
Or would you stay?...

Or would you stay with me, for good
To be beside me, to love me
and
to love you too...
To love me deeply, like you never loved
to love you like no other love on Earth
to hold me tight, to never let me go.
To raise my child,
... my child to be like you,
to have your eyes,
your smile,
your power
and your wisdom...
To have my kindness...

I wonder...
are you my Love,
are you that one I was always looking for?
or it is just a dream?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Abu3li

    It's a nice poem

    like it much

    good luck

  • 18 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    "Never stop smiling, you never know who is going to fall in love with your smile."

    Gabriel Garcia Marquez

    wonderful quote

  • 18 years ago

    by Pete

    Really nice upbeat love poem, I particularly enjoy the imagery you used in this piece. You really let the reader see what you were thinking when you wrote this.

    I would have liked to see a more set rhyme scheme, but it does work nicely without one.

    Overall a pretty well written poem, very good for the first one you have put on this site.

    I look forward to reading more of your work.

    ~Pete.

  • 18 years ago

    by moonlight

    Your lines are really wonderful...Sweet simple and humble......

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