I've been there one too many times. feels great but some times its not the best way. but hey some times it's all you got. great poem

kacy

Very well described, but really dark...
several of my freinds cut... and i dont like it... i do my best to stop them, and i hope im helping them!!!

It's a really great poem. I totally loved it, but like the other one, it lacked the structure. If you put it into the stanzas, it would look way better. It's still good though. 5/5

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So sad.. I really liked it though. I like the concept of blood being paint. Haha, I even have a poem with the line "I'm finger painting with my own crimson blood". The flow was good. I liked your use of words. I can relate..

Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

This was amazing! I have never thought of that like that before. Totally eye-opening to me, really!
I liked the part that said:
She hides her masterpieces under gloves and sleeves
Hoping no one will acknowledge her talent for the blade
Though she tries
She cannot escape her paintings.

I have felt like that before in a way, so it's so cool. Again, I love it.

That was so hauntingly beautiful I loved every word the images were not only stark but very good I fell in love with it all Reminded me of Poe very well done keep up the great work

This piece of full of such passion and the emotions of sorrow are so deep, so intense. This piece caught my attention from beginning to finish. :] Your desriptions were beautiful and the imagery was outstanding. a great write. 5/5.

Good poetry... Hey! you are nice poet... :)
Keep up this good work :D

Wow,gave me strong images! the way you explained the act of self-harm,was really unique and great

Wow,gave me strong images! the way you explained the act of self-harm,was really unique and great

Well done, this was a really descriptive poem. I liked your choice of words, and the imagery was amazing! I think some of the longer lines could have been broken up a bit more so the flow was smoother but other than that you got your point across really well!
5/5

This poem uses a lot of really good metaphors. I really like the imagining in it and how even though it's about cutting, it's not all, oh look how sad my life is during the whole poem. It's like a beautiful sadness in a way.

Keep it up!