Travis, I really liked this poem and how u talked about a boy growing up but just needed a little more rythem but i really liked it and how you put it 4/5

I like how this poem did a full circle with the child "lying on its back" from birth to death, amazing poem. i really enjoyed it and felt the emotion in it
xx
Taegan Emily

So sad

Wow really great the way you used him lying on his back from birth to death

Wow i like this a whole lot

I give you a 4/5

Hey very well written poem !!!