Ecstasy

by Summer   Nov 8, 2007


You gave me love I didnt deserve
you showed me what I couldnt see
You gave me trust I never earned
You really loved me for me

You helped me out, you lit the way
you knew when I was in pain
you always knew what to say
you saw what I couldnt sustain

You brightened my day with just one kiss
your touch made my hair stand on end
you knew exactly what I couldnt resist
which most of all was having a friend

You wiped my tears with your fingertips
you held me until I grew strong
sensations of my skin brushing your lips
felt like everything but wrong

You were my life, my ecstasy
you were all Id ever need
You were my pure reality
and what I had hoped to be

Hope is disappointing that way
I knew Id never get that far
If I were twice who I am today
Id be half of what you are

[please rate.. Im not sure about my poems]

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is a very , very touching poem that brought a real tear to my eye as a i read it. LOL. you have written it with such depth of feeling, a poem about how someone came into your life and brought you love, but then sadly it was not to be. Im rating your poem 5/5, coz you deserve it , for a poem so well written and expressed. Take care nd lol.