Fairly simple but i think it got a message across. Liked the way it had short lines. :D Keep up the good job ok xxx alex xxx

I think this is a really good poem!

And as i read in your profile you love your horses as you said... this poem can relate to horses and also to a certain relationship with another... thats what i belive anyways.

I like to two sides of the poem.

Keep writing please

Danielle
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This was really good! i liked it alot! u so r 2 better than me by like a landslide!

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Great imagery. =] 5/5