Helloo!! thankies for the comment, this poem was not like any other poem I've read before. It tells a differnt love story of how one person can use teh other =S don't like it when people use me =S xxx Love Roxeh

You described emotions in this poem on fantastic way, well done! Fourth stanza is excellent, but second is my favorite, it is really impressing! I really love the way you wrote this piece, you should be proud on your self. This is one of my favorites from you, truly powerfully written, it deserves 5/5

Wow that was a great poem 5/5 keep it up...I love the words you used =]

Many things hurt but when one you cared the most hurt you, its the worst,
great poem and the words are deep, 5/5
thnks for checking out my comment too,
keep writing!

WoW..i really liked it..
i felt the emotion in it.
GrEat JoB!

btw thanks for commenting my poem :)
xoxo

I like this..it has all that deep emotion in it. I can really feel your words. Moving on from someone is really hard..but you must already know that if she treated you that way she is no not worth it. And you are much better than that. So stay strong...but I love the poem. It simple..yet deep. It really touched me. Grerat work! keep it up. =]
--Viola

Honey... "Engrinded" is not even a word. If you are not sure about a word you may go to dictionary.com. It is very helpful. Your poem has potential. It has a good story and good imagery. Just work on your punctuation, grammar, and spelling. Quite frankly, I think you could do more with this poem. Work on it. If you change it or work on it a bit, let me know. I would love to see what it becomes. 4/5

This is realy sad! that happened to me only it was my mom and dad not bf/gf did this realy happen to you or r u just pulling ideas out of thin air its a rely good poam and it makes me want to cry.
good luck your realy talented

Great poem! bravo

I really loved this poem, the expressions were wonderful, the emotions were great, and it had fantastic wording. great job. 5*5
Kimberly

Thats really good

I really like this poem finalgravedigger
5/5

Wow this is deep, u really have a talent for writing poems, mabye we could talk more, do u have myspace, or anything like that?

Hay. thanx for the comment.
this poem iss really good. its like something i have never read before yet at the same time it is the kin of things i have felt. this poem was really close to the heart. i have been played and use for so long. its like you are a nother me...just male lol

AWE! this poem was... idk how 2 say... me! it was awsome!

No wonder this poem has gotten so many comments.. it is truly amazing! The title alone caught my attention, but wow... I never expected it to be this good! I can totally relate. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

This was so sad... but I know how you feel. I can totally relate to this piece, except in like, a female version =) I'm sorry to hear about what happened, and you definitely got not only your point across, but the pain as well. Keep it up dear. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Wow this is amazing. It's like a typical story, but totaly your own and personalized u know? keep up the good work<33

--Xxo That Girl

Hey, FinalGraveDigger

Just checking out some of your poems i really like this one... 5/5 from me

Noelle Wright

Hay im so happy that there are more people who have been used like me and feel how i feel, now i know im not alone out there, thanx bro for the comment hope to stay in touch

Peace,
Jake