Silent Crys

by Jo Anna EL   Nov 11, 2007


I wake one night, frightful and cold.
Too lonely I feel in this world.
What happened to the days that
you were by my side?

I miss the ways you'd hold me
tight.Do hear me now?Do you
see my fears?I feel like dying
because of all your lies,

and the shine,sparkle i see
in your eyes,and since you're not mine now
I Silently Cry.

If you actually read this far into my poetry then know all my poems now will probably be about lost love and desired love.Because he has her now.And for a while it felt like i had him.
Again special thanks to reproducedbyintellagence
she edited some of the mistakes i made!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I wake one night, frightful and cold.
    Too lonely i[[capitalize the I]] feel in this world.
    What happened to the days that
    you were by my side?

    I miss the ways you'd hold me tight
    .Do hear me now?
    Do you see my fears?
    I feel like dying because of all your lies,

    And the shine and sparkle
    I see in your eyes,
    Since, your[[you're>>> it means you are.]] not mine now
    I Silently Cry.-

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    Okay, I love this poem.
    You have great talent, darling.
    I think they all just need editing and a few tweaks with the way it's put out to help the flow and neatness of it.

    You're an amazing writer.
    5.5

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