by FridusBlueheaven Nov 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Little Lady Love, |
by Marc Ortiz
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It was a great poem. I like the use of repetition in the 1st line of each stanza. What I like in this poem was... The flow, it really flowed well and the rhyming words are perfect. Keep up the good work. |
by RobinAnn13
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Cute and effective. Once again good choice of words! <3<3 |
by HaileyHelen
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I love the repitition and the flow and the scheme! it was a really great piece all around |
by UnToLd TrUtH
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I loved it! You are a talented writer and it sounded so sweet. |
by Alya
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This poem really flows. I think it will make a great song! |