You've captured an emotion that some of us have actually been through. Could "feel" this from start to finish. Great write!!

This really has amazing emotion.
Your writing is tremendous hun!

A bit chilling. Nicely written.
Good luck in the contest.

Picturing your complete destruction
has become my favorite fantasy
One day soon, I'll unleash this wrath
And set this uncontrollable anger free

^I loved that stanza, It was my favorite of them all because it held so much emotion written deep within and showed how damn angry you were portrayed to be.

The flow was beautiful I love that about your poems they always have this smoothe almost chant like flow which captures me and keeps me in a trace.

The word choice! Again I always love your word choice. You pick jut the right words. Never too simple and never overly done which creates a gorgeous poem.

A favorite from you definitly. It was amazing.

Great poem,, It flowed nicely.. But I just felt the emotion not too strong,, I mean the last stanza.. The other stanzas, they were strong and powerful,, And you use nice words to wrote this nice poem.. It was a great poem...
Well done,,
5/5

I could feel your rage here. The emotion was intense. 5/5

I deffinitly love it. all the emotion in it runs through me. it is a little angry, but i feel as if ni could relate to it. if you read mine you'll understand.

okay enough of my opinion... this poem is very bitter. i think if you wrote about how the cruel words affected you, like you described how it hurt youre soul it wouldve been cool. even w/o that, its amazing...
5/5