Is it your luck or life??

by Biya   Nov 13, 2007

Are you tired with your life?
Or stunned at your busy life?

Do you weep sometimes at what you got in your life?
Or you weep at once when you get your heart broken?

Do you feel relax while imagining?
Or get angry when these imaginations pass away?

Do you believe life is complicated?
Or it is sophisticated?

Do you think life is diplomat?
Or do you think it is fair?

What either you think,
I'd like to say!

Life is unjust
It beats the luck...

People don't have lack of luck
But they don't believe life is unjust

Oh people! why do you blame your luck?
Don't you know its only your support!

Ah! I feel sympathy for you people
You decieve your luck and frustate it

It's your only companion which tries till last
But you don't accept and say it left in last!

Life is really not fair
It take our tears!


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Latest Comments

  • 12 years ago

    by Ali Khan

    Salam! u write so well*hats off*i really liked ur poem!!impressive material!

  • 12 years ago

    by Cobra

    Loved your poem, my life is just bad luck. if something goods happen, it does not last long. My life is to complicated.

    Again nice one 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    Very passionatly written poem.... :)
    gave it a 5/5
    plz return the favor...............

  • 12 years ago

    by desperately needing you

    I like this one