Very beautiful dedication Ingrid......it brings to mind a picture we had in our bedroom as kids.... of a guardian angel watching over two children....

If one has the fortune to find their soulmate in life they are indeed fortunate.

"Their search has come to an end
finally someone who understands
to attend to their comfort and needs
and cure their hearts that bleed"

^very uplifting ending....nice job! Take care, Debbie

Slowly she approaches these angels
abandoned by God
She spreads out her arms
and showers them with love
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^ love that stanza. I loved the whole thing, it's like I can see it all taking place. And like Debbylyn, I have a portrait thing of an angel watching over a little boy, and a little prayer on the bottom. It reminded meof that too. Heh. Never stop writing! 5/5

` Liz =]

A beautiful tribute you have penned here Hun.. Such meaningful words you have expressed.. Well done

Very beautiful poem, i can imagine that moment...

one note though: i didn't like the part "abandoned by God" rather than that good poem

Wonderful poem, 5/5.

A beautifully well written poem.
5/5.

After careful consideration I replaced the word "abandoned"by "neglected".. because God would never abandon anyone......
Thank you Adel, for pointing that out to me.
You are right, little bro!

Love your poem. Very nice.

I found this poem really good it was so nice

This is so emotive and beautiful! i love it!!!

take care

XXX

That was a deep poem.
Keep up the good work.

Beautiful write
got me rght in the heart
you are amazingly talented
keep it up!
it's nice to meet you Ingrid,i'mLisa.
hope to keep in touch,take care
-Lisa

Yes keep them in your heart forevr ingrid, dont let them go.

5/5 David

I love it!!..^_^
it so touching....
i love it..
i love it..
i love it...
i love it!!!!!!!!.........

Another Great Write, Congrats!!!

Your simple nature of writing amazes me in many ways....I am not sure how do I describe it but I find your poetries very pleasant and its simplicity brings me comfort yet, its all so meaningful!

:O a very powerful ending to a stunning and beautifully written poem, Ingrid. I loved every bit of it; syllable, word on word, every line. I am glad you mentioned this poem to me. :) I know I might of come around to it someday, but someday is today. :) And I'm glad. Thank you!

5/5

Bri~

Looking for comfort, seeking for care
^^i love love love that line!!! idk why but i really liked
good job with this its a very unique poem and i like that because it makes it memorable
5/5<33

This was a beautiful poem, a great write. Thanks for sharing it. :)

This was a beautiful poem, a great write. Thanks for sharing it. :)