What a sad piece but your feelings come alive. It's a shame when we are so much in love, we begin to have fears. I do the same thing and I have found that writing seems to ease them a bit.

The ending is a little too dark, and scary, i'll die without you, but other than that, great poem!

I really like this poem because i feel like i can relate to you and most girls can too great work 5/5

I can realte to this peice.
Sometimes the fear hurts more than if it actually happens.Cause the pain would just be to much to bear eventually your would go numb..
But with the fear, it's consuming. Especially if your affraid of loosing the one that completes you.

This peice is amazing, you put into words what I could not.
Absolutly wonderful.
--Elly

There are always some fears in relationships the only thing you can do is trust that your sweetheart is doing the right thing and that he loves you as much as I can tell you love him! Good job 5/5 for me!

Well this is my favorite out of the four :) Don't really believe in rumors... Just believe in the person you love. Trust me.. Coz that happened to me before... And I was really wrong to believe in other people... and in the end.. the person I love left me..

Anyway keep writing. TC

AW, BABY. HOW COME U'VE NEVER SHOWN ME THIS COMMENT. U'LL NEVER LOOSE ME!