Confusion in Dark

by matt   Nov 15, 2007


My life darkens...to the point its pitch black...
I can't find the exit... cant find the way out...
Lost in the crumbling path... can't go back...
Things we hate... and things we doubt...

Love is blind... love is tough...
It hurts... it bleeds so much...
This life I lead becomes real rough...
Just trying to remember your warm touch...

These tears I shed... as my heart bleeds...
Each word written... my eyes see...
Each taken in... as I read...
Pain and sorrow... is not new to me...

The one thing that cheers me up... broke...
A pain so real... a pain so new...
Feels so lifeless...as my heart chokes..
Feeling so dead... feeling so blue...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    I really loved your poem... I've felt that way too sometime quite long ago... I hope that you will feel a bit happier soon. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    I loved It!
    5/5 all the way!!!
    Keep writing!

    ~Ally

    P.S- I'd love to get to know the writer behind this poem. Message me at anytime! ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    A good poem , it made my one of the belief strong which is:
    Life is not fair,
    It takes our tears
    Biya

  • 16 years ago

    by meandhim080307

    Wow, i absolutely loved this poem. it was amazing. so much emotion, wonderful expression, fantastic flow. great job. 5*5
    Kimberly

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