Omg, im soo sorry... wow, thats aweful...
for the poem, i think the slang shouldnt be used, my first day i was told to say you not u.
the idea is amazing though, and im sry you had to go through that... :(

Omg im sorry... thats horrible. im really really srry... :( that must have ben bad.. srry..

Hey man im sorry to hear that....

So sorry about your lil brother

I am so sorry about your little brother ,I have 2 brothers and I could never imagine life without them.It was a very well written piece ,I am sure your brother woudl be very proud of you for you have a talent in writing.

Im am realy sorry to hear about your lose, i agree with what you say about gangs i ahte them to, i think they are all cowards and should rot in hell for what they do...
xXxXoOoO

That's such a shame. People are cruel. I am terribly sorry you and your brother had to go through that. My greatest apologies! A wonderful work of writing, though. You're incredible to be pushing through this.

Im terribly sorry about your brother. :-( I understand the pain of losing someone. You're in my thoughts.

beautiful poem

That was really touching. And even before finding out it was true, it sounded true. There was a really strong emotion there and it shines through. Very good. and I am so sorry for what happened to your brother. some people just can't value a life, i guess. you're in my prayers.

wonderful poem though.