Revenge

by Yeka   Nov 15, 2007


You moved on
And all this time I was torn. Shred
Not even understanding why
Forbidding myself from crying
I had fallen in love
You could rote in hell
And I hope you suffer as I did to
I used to cried
But I rather you would die
I used to cry at night
I hold my teddy bear so tight
I'm with my boyfriend now
And I will hunt you
And that I will vow
I'll destroy your dreams
Full of life and full of peace
You could rote in hell
And I'll thank god,
that I will get well

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  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Hey there, Just some advice on your poem :D

    Its really good but i think you could have chosen some of your words better..

    'I found out that you moved on'
    could be..
    ' You moved on '

    'All this time I was ripped apart
    I don't know why
    I don't want to cry'

    could be ...

    'And all this time I was torn. Shread'
    'Not even understanding why'
    'Forbidding myself from crying.'

    You see I limited the 'I' and other small words, it helps flow sometimes :D

    xxx alex xxx

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