A Hurricane Of Tears.

by Crystal Gaze   Nov 15, 2007


A dull ache settled in the pit of my stomach as my tears became painful to hold in.
Nothing could have prepared me for this blow, I could still hear his words echoing
painfully through my mind.
An image flashed in my sight; Brown eyes,chestnut hair...And then another.Honey locks,
onyx eyes, a heart melting smile- My love, My life, My Happiness holding hands with perfection.
Doubts screamed through my head...
"Your loosing him! no one could ever love you.He checked her out, she's gorgeous and has
everything on you.There perfect for each other it won't be long now..."
My eyes blurred with tears, as the pain became unbearable. My chest ached, it hurt so bad.
I could feel another heart being ripped from my body, I felt lost, unwanted, but most of all
terrified.
He lay beside me- My Beloved- with a small gap separating us. I plead silently for him to
demolish the space, needed him to take me in his arms and hold me till this storm
passed... But he made no move, he didn't even twitch, he lay perfectly still.
So when all the fear came crashing down, I fell perfectly into his arms and sobbed
as I was pressed tighter against his chest, and a light broke through the dark
fog...

By:Elaine.C.

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I'd appreciate comments and votes, as I would love to know what you guys think.
This piece was written from my life, so I hope you enjoy.:)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Damned from the Holy

    Dam dude, this poem is so bad ass. i love it. i wish i could write this good 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Another wonderful piece! Perfectly written if I must say so myself =}
    My favorite part in this one was:

    "He lay beside me- My Beloved- with a small gap separating us. I plead silently for him to
    demolish the space, needed him to take me in his arms and hold me till this storm
    passed... But he made no move, he didn't even twitch, he lay perfectly still."

    Idk why exactly, but it stuck out to me. Beautiful poem I think
    5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    5/5 i tried to comment ur second to last wouldnt let me so here

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Omg, Elaine!! I cannot believe you made a poem this sad >.< It honestly brought me to tears. The way you decribed this boy.. I was putting every detail I knew of Tyler in my head whenever I read this and just imagined this being about me and him. I couldn't tear my eyes from your words. They were so powerful and wow.. I loved it! You have such a way with words Elaine.. *Sniffles* I love you! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I really love the style of yours. This is very well written poem with a good imagery and the story was so powerful. You deserve 5/5!!!