That was a sexy poem .
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loved it

Good write keep it up! 5/5 love ya!

This poem was very intresting. but i did think the 6th stanza was kinda forced. reword that and this poem wold b great

Very nice i like it...

This is a very captivating poem. The content is very deep,while the flow is flawless

Great poem, I love the emotion you put. It must be 5/5!!!