Your feelings of love come through so strong in this piece. The flow is aff just a little but it didn't take away from the piece.

Whatever you need to hear
Where ever you walk with me
Whatever your heart desires
As long as together we can be.

This is a great stanza. The things we will do for love.
Good job!
Take care Cindy

AMAZINGG!.. i lovee the way you responded to each stanza of my poem.. this is such a beautiful poem..

i love these 2 stanzas..

I can not change my thoughts
Nor can I change my views
You said you loved me for me
If I changed, me would you refuse

I have suffered a lot of pain
I've loved you through all the fights
I've cried myself to sleep
On many long, lonely nights

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mine were :

Would you change all your thoughts..
opinions and views?
If he asked you to..
would you not even refuse?

Would you suffer through the pain..
of beatings and fights?
And cry yourself to sleep
all those long, lonely nights?

very very nice job.. haha i love it.. thanks for the shout out down there too.. i appreciate it.. keep it up =)

I loved this poem alot. It was beautifully sweet. So many emotions portrayed within your word choice. The flow was flawless and the way you expressed what you care about so much stunned me. This was an amazing read. Well done. 5/5 ~Mel

Such a perfect poem for the simple fact that I think anybody would do anything for the person they love, and if they don't then I guess it isn't love. Amazing poem 5/5 GG23 P.S. Yes petals haha thankyou I was so tired, I appreciate it - take care :)

Wow this is an absolutly beautiful poem!!...i exspecially liked this part:

"I have suffered a lot of pain
I've loved you through all the fights
I've cried myself to sleep
On many long, lonely nights"
it reminded me so much of me and my fiance.....you could have all the ugliest , painful fights in the world...but at the end of the day you guys love eachother....you did an amazing job writing this...definetly 5/5:)

Wow...I freaking love this poem! Perfectly written. Great words. I loved it. 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Awww this is a cute poem i love it!! My favorite stanza is...

I would fly the seven seas
To get a hug from you
Your arms, my favorite place
Yes, its absolutely true...

That part is so cute. 5/5

Pne of the best and a lovley thing to read after reading live wells version.Your poems truley touch the heart and soul.
~Jo Anna eternallover

This poem is so taken to heart at the moment that I just want to tell someone that I love them when I can hardly say anything to that person..... Excellent!

It is Really really nice poem. It is like an orange full of juice of love. well done.

Very nice i liked it alot .. very good keep up the good work

Your poem is good and it is very touching

This is an awesome write dear friend....very inspiring and so much full of lovely thoughts....i am sure every reader would be feeling 100 years younger after reading this one.. :o)

all the best and take care

Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!

Holy crap dear...this is BEAUTIFUL.

My favourite part in this is the imagery...so wonderfully detailed and descritipve that it creates such stunning vivid visuals for the reader, that it's like they can -see- everything that you are describing.

Your flow is PERFECT. I read this outloud and the flow doesn't falter one, it's beautiful.

In my opinion, this is one of your best by far.

I love It I love it I LOVE IT!!!!!!! this is really touching and really good writing lol it makes me think of somone special i love lol you should comment my poems

First poem I've found with so many veiws.
Now I know why great job. :)