Please

by Yvonne   Nov 17, 2007


My heart feels like
Its torn in two
When I think of what
Ive done to you
I am so sorry
For what I did
Please forgive me
I was just a kid
But now Im grown
I finally know
That all your love
Was not a show
Please come back
I love you so
But if you want
I will forever go

This poem was made for a book I am writing. Please comment to help my book.

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  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Oh man, that's a good poem. Seriously, it is! It feels great, not just sounds great.

    It flows super well too. And it's so simple, yet not, if that made any sense at all.

    BTW, I still want to read what you have of that book so far.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Alone

    This is a really good poem. It seems really young and like someone trying to get someone they love back so it's a love poem and I really do like it so good job.

    -Skittlz

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Yvonne,

    This poem is cute and ind of a story as well.
    I hope he returned to you!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

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