Claustrophobia

by lifestory   Nov 17, 2007


Are you her bad example
or her solution to escaping pain
it just takes one simple cut
she can feel the blood flowing through her veins

hurry up, she's out of breath
her heart slowing down the beats
her walls are closing in
there's blood stained on the sheets

and you're witnessing her every move
as you quietly whisper "i love you"
now is it claustrophobia
or perhaps she's scared it's not true.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    This is wat i call a bitter sweet love poem, 1 of my favs. keep it up, rating: 5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by meandhim080307

    All i can say is wow. this was a powerful and wonderful piece. it had a fantastic flow and marvelous expression. i loved it. 5*5
    Kimberly