I like this poem...Good Job 5/5

This love poem is so passionate it is smoking.
I like your metaphors and overall wording

Ha. Cute. I really liked this poem alot. I found it to be cute and sweetly written. Short, but sweet and held alot of emotion within each line. The word choice simple but effective and the flow spot on. It didn't fault what so ever. A great read. Well done. ~Mel

I love the beginning of your poem it is really superb. YOU have a talent and plse dont stop writing. You would improve a lot. :) tc

Ooo. I like this one. =] Great job.