Very heartfelt and good imagery. I like how descriptive you are and you have a unique sense of writing. Very good! <3

WOW i kno how u feel in diz poem diz iz really good i can feel wat ur sayin!!!good job! well check mine out and comment for me plz!!

Please dont die

but i really like this poem....its short but i can feel the emotion and hurt flowing from every word nice job.....5/5

deanna

Heh, i liked this poem its pretty good only two things.

On a one or two lines it kinda doesnt make sense but i could be wrong

And two the flow kinda gets messedup on a couple lines but besides that good job 4/5

Heh, i liked this poem its pretty good only two things.

On a one or two lines it kinda doesnt make sense but i could be wrong

And two the flow kinda gets messedup on a couple lines but besides that good job 4/5

Heh, i liked this poem its pretty good only two things.

On a one or two lines it kinda doesnt make sense but i could be wrong

And two the flow kinda gets messedup on a couple lines but besides that good job 4/5

I really like this one
Flows well
Keep up the good work =]
And thanks for the comments, sorry I took so long getting back to you
XxJaynexX

That was so sad! So much emotion, such a sad but clear message so simple... yet so complicated. Very well portrayed/written!

Completely get where your coming from, i get stereo typed as a gothic/emo kind of person don't get me wrong i have no problem with being called those things but seriously i get called that every fricken day, and im usually ticked off at the end of the day, so thats a really good poem, and emo people rock(come to the darkside, we have cookies!!!, LOL) later

Great poem, understand how ya feel, good flow.

You seem to cover the top soil good the flow was done ok but there was no real depth to the work no core exsamples nothing for the reader to really hold on to or care about, like I said to be a great writer you need to make the reader feel for you I did not find it here sorry.