I loved this one ,and its one I can certainly relate to as there is someone I miss.Very well written ,well done.

I like the feeling behind it and I can relate to it, the flow was just a little off for me, if you shortened a couple of the lines, it would flow smoothly all the way through.

I miss your smile.
Laughing all night.
I miss your eyes,
Sparkling bright.

Just an example. All in all nic work. Hope I helped :)

Your rhymes were impressive and sent your message flawlessly. 5/5

Wow,nice poem, very sweet great job!

Very beautiful poem. It showed a lot of emotion in it and it's very well written. Except, the ending lines weren't as powerful as the rest of the poem. Great poem. 5/5

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Wow, this is very sentimental and I love the emotion and the flow. You did it great and it must be 5/5!!!

Wow i just love it.....5/5

I liked it! The flow was great and the style was simple and sweet. The emotions you described were real and felt as if they were from your heart.

"Baby, were meant to be. "
^it's "we're"

well done

Wow! this is amazing<33
i cant pick out a fav in this one. it was all so good and it flowed perfectly.
keep it coming.

This poem was another sweet and simple one. I like how you can create a heartfelt poem with simple and basic rhyme and it doesn't seem boring or plain. The last line i'm not really sure about it. I think it may flow a bit better if you altered it just a tiny touch to "Baby, you were ment for me" or something along them lines but that's just my personal opinion nothing big that trashes your poetry. Overall a good flowing piece which you poured your heart out into. Well done. Keep up the good work. ~Mel

And yet, another one of your wonderful poems. It's a really beautiful poem. I really love the passion in this. Great job! 5/5

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