Candy Coated Lies

by Beautiful Chaos   Nov 20, 2007


Honey dripping days with dew,
Sugar springs sweet and true,
Soft and fluffy marshmallow clouds,
Candied streets full of crowds,
Lollipop trees, sweetest creation,
Gum drop tears,
Decaying nation....

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  • 15 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    LOVED it!!
    I can't believe the low rating this has. It is so true and I like the use of sarcasm. I completely agree with you.
    It's short but tells so much.
    <3
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    I really like the sarcasm in the title and the imagery was fantabulous, I just wish it was a little longer! It kind of made me think of an evil version of Charlie and the chocolate factory (if you've seen the film you'll understand!)

    Em xXx

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