My Anger Eats at my Sanity

by Men   Nov 21, 2007


I can't hold on to myself
I am maddening
I try to make the right moves
I just end up lost within

My fist clenched so tight
My anger is realeased
My eyes losing sight
My mind has now break

These Autumn trees of colors and beauty
An intamacy of ones deepest dreams
As I look the colors starts to bleed
It then turns into blood and I start to scream

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    My mind has now break
    this is the only line it the entire poem that just didn't seem to fit somehow, the rest was absoulty vivid and brillant. The flow would have been perfect if not for that, but other wise it was good 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnnys Medicine

    A piece of great work wonderfully written
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    ^^
    What she said, but even more so you went to the heart of the matter. You stated your point and it was explicit and simple. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goldgal

    "I can't hold on to myself
    I am maddening
    I try to make the right moves
    I just end up lost within"

    These lines hit me the most because I think we all get like that somewhere in our lives.

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