Regret Flight

by xPerfect Chaosx   Nov 22, 2007


You see me here,
I'm standing on the edge
Ready to ________________________Fall!

Slowly but surely, making a wish
Death has to be preferable to this
Say a silent ______________________Regret

It just leads to just more hope,
To make things all right
How did it ever come to_____________This

Unfair for certain,
Cruel and whimsical in it's needs
This little thing called _______________Life

The pain is unbearable,
Crushing me with it's enormity,
And it's all because of_______________You

Slowly but surely tearing me apart
The hopes and and dreams and
Wishing for all the things you_________Didn't

Feet leaving the Earth,
Defying gravity with all my might
I hope you can, without me,__________Live.

Please enjoy, it's the first one I've ever written like this, so honest criticism is always welcome. Thanks for reading!!!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Laloser05

    I loved it.
    I really could feel it, it wasn't long and filled with so many words i feel like i'm drowning, it was simple, but really honest.

    I've read a couple of your other poems, and I really love your work.
    Wish I was half as good.

    5/5
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww man this is really sad. I like the way you write. Give me nightmares lol. j/k Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 12 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    My Dearest Cinnamon Toast Crunch,
    This was a sad poem and I, for one, am not happy when you are not happy. I will catch you at the bottom if ever you should fall. I will be the helping hand holding you back from the ledge on which you are poised to jump from. I hope that this is a work of fiction, because if not, I am kicking somone's sorry behind REAL soon. :] Always here for you love.

    Much Love To You
    Your Wifey,
    x0x Hunni Bunches of Oats x0x