Wow great message you got your feeling across very smoothly, great flow. Good understanding people can relate from very different points of view. loved it 5/5

Hell

Powerful atmosphere! Very effective work and topic is great. I like the ending, so intense line. You did really good job on this, I love the way you wrote it, totally unqiue and interesting, it kept my attention in every stanza. Very creative and original poem, well done, I enjoyed in it.

This is a really awesome poem, hun. I love it. 5/5

This piece was good, but I didn't absolutely love it. [But that's just me] I like the wayy you structured this piece as well and I like the idea behind the poem. It's different from most, and that's a plus. :] Still, 5/5.

"And their sole purpose it,"...i think you meant 'it' to be 'is'.

but other than that, i really like this- it's got a lot of emotion in it. haters has never been a great word for me, but you put it to use very nicely and it just makes this poem all the better. nice job

Great job. i loved it. 5/5.

Haters gonna hate
like the descriptive words in the beginning

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I like it! :) The second and at the end bothered me a bit, though.

And shove them aside,
And leave them to die.

I would take out the first "and."

Very true, liked this:)