Its Rain

by Rachel   Nov 23, 2007


It's cold but comforting
fast, but keeps me slow
its a place where I can cry
when I have no place to go

it seems gloomy
but makes my day
off my face
it wipes my tears away

when I hear it
my heart skips
as I rush outside
to feel it fall upon my lips

when its gone
it breaks my heart
as I ponder at how long
we'll be apart

its almost as if
its a part of me
something special
no one else can see

something about it
no one understands
it meets the many needs
of my heart and it's commands

I just love the way
that it hides my many fears
and in its hiding it blends
my endless seeming tears

I could watch it through a window
for hours upon hours on end
it gradually makes me happier
with every moment in it I spend

I love it dearly
you may think I'm silly
you see it as nothing more
than the thing that makes you chilly

But I love it
clearly a gift from heaven
Its Rain

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  • 16 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    The rain does something quite like that for me as well!
    wow i've never found anyone who understood my passion for the rain!
    very good! amazing imagery!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by living life

    I loved it, its true. I Love the rain too.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I loved how you worded it, and the imagery was awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved it!! You painted beautiful imagery in my mind with your words. Everything flowed flawlessly and nothing seemed forced. I am quite fond of the rain also ... Beautifully done. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aweh. I <33 this poem. You know why? Because I absolutely love rain, it's my favorite type of weather.

    This poem was beautifully written. The emotions were strong, the flow was flawless, and the imagery was mind blowing. Fantastic job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5

    -- Steph. <33