Very true...and a great way to prepare somebody for life...loved it.5/5

Love this poem!

Keep writing please... love your work

Danielle
xx

I loved the line-sometimes you have to be sober-a lot of times when things get too rough people turn to drugs or alchohol, and sometimes you have to do as you said in those lines.
It's a great poem, and you make a very good point.

I loved this poem so much. very good. this is very true poem. kasia

Very true. I like the ways or examples you used to kinda describe how to pepare and what to do .

Very sweet.. Loved it.. as well.. keep it up..
FILLIE :D

Very sweet.. Loved it.. as well.. keep it up..
FILLIE :D

Nice poem. I found the message profound and positive. You seem like you have something to teach people. I liked the message inside it.
Great work.

Greta xx

That was a great poem, i loved it 5/5 <3

Very nice, and enlightening. Thats exactly life should be described. Great job.

"Life isn't life without love
love has been the recharge to all of us
So protect the love inside
If you really want to survive in the game of life"

Loved this part.

A beautiful and inspiring piece which a lot of people can learn something about.
An enjoyable read.
Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem of faith.