A Friend to Lift Me Up

by МÅťťђĕш Яĕĩŋĕßĕřg   May 11, 2004


Walking along on a track leading nowhere,
This road that never seems to have an end
I stop and think and I always wonder
Will I like what is behind the next bend?
My feet are aching, my legs are so sore
From trudging through a bog of mud and sand
One slip and I'd get sucked into the depths
I know I need to have a saving hand
So lift me up, when I fall down or trip.
Lift me from the shadows of the quick-sand.
Raise me out of the murky water deep.
Raise me up to where it's safe, on the land.
A fall will make my gaze turn up and then.
I know a friend can pick me up again.

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  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    i liked how you started and ended the poem. the concept was really nice. great piece. keep it up! take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Laurel S

    great job deffinate 5, i know how it feels to be needing a friend the help you
    ~laurel

  • 20 years ago

    by heather

    keep up the gr8 work i think u have a lot of talent keep up the awesome work

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