Bieng Me

by ilovenicole   Nov 24, 2007


It ain't no fun
being me
If i had a gun
There would be no me
I'm just as good as dead
The burden I carry feels like im made of lead
Hell, if someone told me I was gonna die
I wouldn't cry
I'd smile
Tell her "I wont see you in a while."

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  • 17 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    "It ain't no fun
    being me
    If i had a gun
    There would be no me"

    I read that part and I immediatly had to finish the poem, a good begining can affect how good the whole poem is, its a first impression, the ending wasn't as good as the begining but I still liked it
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by she

    I like it,wish u didnt feel this way,but good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Katelyn

    Its real intresting....
    different but intresting i like the end the most bout how u wouldn't cry... its good... keep it up
    -----------------------------------------------------
    Kay

  • 18 years ago

    by katelynn

    Thats good!!
    i hope u really dont do that :/
    okay..thanks for the message!
    KateLynn Out <3

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