This is quite an unusual format which to me makes the poem all the more desirably unique I also am impressed by the thought provoking deep theme in other words I really enjoyed reading this

A very sad poem. But very nicely written.
The emotion, here, was captured nicely as
well. :] and the imagery was outstanding.
another great write. 5/5.

This is scary, but amazing at the same time. The beginning is awesome, but the end is even more... I can't even think of a word to describe it. Really great work, here. And a great title. =]

Wow that was a powerful ending leaving me breathless. The flow you created here was different from the other poems I read but I liked it :] Your imagery here was just amazing which is what stood out to me from this piece. It's as if you ripped me from my reality and took me on a journey with your words. I just loved it. Well done *5/5*