Goodbye My Almost Lover! <3

by Christina   Nov 28, 2007


Goodbye my almost lover
Goodbye my almost dream
Goodbye my almost life

Goodbye to everything
Everything me and you had
You said you would never get mad

Goodbye my almost lover
Goodbye my almost dream
Goodbye my almost life

Goodbye to your kisses
The kisses that made me melt
You said you would never stop

Goodbye my almost lover
Goodbye my almost dream
Goodbye my almost life

Goodbye to you hugs
The hugs that kept me sterdy
You said you would never let go

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexander

    It is a good poem all together but not as good as some of the others of yours that i have read. The stanza reapeting got on my nerves slightly but other than that it was good. 4/5

    Signed,
    Alexander

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    Aww such a sad poem i can relate i was going out with this boy four about 2 almost three years and i moved away far and it was impossible for us to see each other so we had to break up so sad!!...=(

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. this was beautiful and touching.
    i could feel the emotion. .
    and it's alwayz sad and hard to say goodbye.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Personally I think the one stanza was repeated to much and if you would have only said it maybe twice it would have been a better poem
    3/5 kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwz thx!