I loved the true and real emotions you expressed here. The flow was great and the imagery was wonderful. The questions you asked are ones I have asked before so I could relate. Well done *5/5*

It's wonderful, specially the feelings of speclations.

keep it up

5/5

This poem is really sweet and sentimental. I love the way you express the sweetness in this love poem!!! By the way, it's 5/5 without a doubt!!!

Good job! i liike it!

Again the raw emotion was so strong and vivid, my reading got faster and faster when i read this it was wonderful.

Okay I am going to be honest ... I do think the flow was rocky and lines seemed forced. There were some places I was lost because the words you used did not make sense. I advise you to read over your poem and all the mistakes will become clear and once you fix them, this poem will be beautiful.

I did like the poem though. The questions you asked are ones I have found myself asking too. But sometimes you can never truly know the answers to them.

well done.

Thats a good question. how will i know? lol anyway i liked this one. there are a lil tweaks you need to fix though but i liked it

~shattered dreams~

I thought it was okay I think of this more as a rough draft I' would go back look at it and try to rewrite it into something new it really helps improve your skills
4/5
kaila

How will I KNow =know

I liked the emotion expressed in this poem, however to me the flow was off and rocky. I think if you concerntrate more on the flow and grammer then your poetry would improve muchly. Again emotion is beautifully sweet, with sadness within. Good effort. 4/5 ~Mel

I really like this one also. it liked the flow and i can relate to it! another good poem!

The emotion in this poem was also great.
i liked how you used to questions to start the stanza "how will i know"
it was great.
5/5

This poem starts good. The continuem of this poem is a little weak. Again I don't see much rhymes, the meaning fades a little through the poem. The choosing of words could be better and the flow cuts in the middle. A nice piece though 4/5

So great the way you say how i will know every time , this makes me keep searching to know