Once again editing would be great.

I think that if you used more emotional and descriptive words, made it more easy to relate to instead of just pointblank.
You have it so downpat, like there's no getting around it, and there isn't.
but, describe the monster, the fear, the lifelessness of the dream.
Then, people will be able to relate.

Overall you did an okay job, it has potential, you have potential.
Make it something you'd want to read.

I liked this poem alot. the flow was perfect and u choed excellent words to go along with it.
the story line was really good to. my fav stanza was

In the dream I see a monster,
So ugly that it scares me.
It tells me it's my time to die
And tries to kill me

that stanza is i think what made the poem come to life. rlly good poem

I again really like the theme...maybe next time really get into it and describe your dreams. but I also really like the flow...there were some repeated words that stuck out a lot like me...but oh well
5/5
kaila

I would rework this one, It has great potenchel.

The title drew me in, I like the first 2 stanzas, but it falls apart a bit in the last two. It was a good effort and I think it has a lot of potential, it just needs a little work.

U USUALLY DON'T WRITE THESE KIND OF POEM, BUT IT'S A GOOD ONE.