This poem is sweet and honest. By the short stanzas and structure you seemed to pass out the point of how sorry you were. The poem's flow and rhyming are good, keep it up 5/5

Wow i love it
its how i feel bout my boyf
wat a way to describe it
just brilliant
5/5
xx

Perfectly wonderful piece, very moving, and thankyou for your previous comment =] xx

Waw, you are so great, with simple words and nice flow realy 5/5 not enough

Very well done!
loved every word of it!
kinda how i am feeling at the moment....
nice work 5/5
xo

I like this poem. It gives a good description and gives the point off straight forward. Good job!